The Singing inspector By Gladys (Danika)

I had the worst day ever at singing today! The singing inspector was at singing and his name is Raymond. He had the most dreadful attitude and he looked dreadful too. He wore knickerbockers and weird big stockings. He looked like a crazy man!

We were at singing while some other kids were doing math in the other room. We were practicing and he called Benny and Charles first. I felt sorry for them. They sang a song called Pretty Polly and it was very embarrassing and what made it more embarrassing was that it was the only song they knew. They sang in different pitches and it was terrible.

He called Jesse next and she sang so beautifully that I’m sure Mr R liked her. I was not sure what song she was singing but it was amazing.

He called me, Iris and Armstrong. I was so scared that I started shaking, he called us mutes and shouted at us to make us sing.I felt so angry and just wanted to kick him in the shin but I couldn’t do anything because I was too scared. He must be the most mean guy in this whole world. This is why I wish I was with the math class and had nothing to do with singing.

Comments

  1. Aimees13 May 2019 at 03:23

    Wow that Singing Inspector is so mean!

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  2. Anonymous24 May 2019 at 02:06

    Danika, you have expressed yourself clearly and organised your paragraphs well. Your story flows easily. Just try to include even more of your character's feelings and emotions.

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